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Submitted: February 16, 2012
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Boarding Call WIPby ~ModalMechanica

Designs & Interfaces / Game Development Art / Game Concepts & Illustrations / Buildings and Environments

Some HW for Environment Design at CDD. NEED CRIT I need 5 of these by monday, but I want them to be awesome! THANKS

*Also, I know the perspective is way off. HALP ME.

Critique by ~WithintheMechanism Feb 23, 2012, 8:05:32 AM

I like it. It has a nice, murky atmosphere. The people on the walkway could do with a tad more detail, just to help with recognition. The mech is awesome. No real criticism there. I love the glowing pylons disappearing off into the fog. I think the text is a problem. It stands out too much. Everything else is surrounded by a mist, with soft glows and blurred details. The text looks a little slapped on. You might be able to add a little gaussian blur too it, maybe drop the opacity. I think it might look better if it appeared similar to the lights above it, graphically. I know this was done quick, and I think your technique fits the style. Good work.

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~genghiscanlas Nov 9, 2012

sooo good

~suitandarmour Mar 13, 2012

tilt the camera slightly less, enlarge the mech, put something in the immediate forground and maybe one more detail pass for good measure D.

~ModalMechanica Mar 14, 2012

thanks!

~Keydan Feb 22, 2012

Gate M is not for pussies. They have a robot guarding it

~exocolumn Feb 19, 2012

Great work!

~ModalMechanica Feb 20, 2012

thanks man

~MrJumpManV4 Feb 17, 2012 Hobbyist Digital Artist

Love the mech, all i could think of to add would be some sort of VTOL flying through the open space on the right and like 8ft spider said some guards on the underpass on the left.

~Gray-Mecha-Fox Feb 17, 2012 Student Digital Artist

Can't critique because I am not a good artist but, sharpen the images and add some life?(color, perhaps sunset so you still get the gloomy effect I am getting or add street lights if you want to do shading.

~8FtSpider Feb 17, 2012 Professional Artist

Just a few things:
maybe, armed guards on walkway
make sure to light the scene with the lights shown in the scene (green or yellow lights giving green or yellow highlights)
make the "GATE M" hologram larger, maybe give it a rectangle holo-frame

Best of luck!

~ec4370 Feb 17, 2012

I'm not good at giving critiques, but so far this looks really good.

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